Selasa, 21 Februari 2012

MY HOLIDAY

      Last holiday My family and I visited to Magelang.We visited the most famous  place as Borobudur temple and Malioboro.We went there by car .We left for Magelang at 9:30 a.m.First ,We visited Borobudur temple .We arrived at Borobudur temple fifteen minutes later.The tickets were cheap enough.We very amazed saw Borobudur temple.There were many small temple and one excellent temple which in top Borobudur temple.I and My family were taking some photographs.
      After that at about 14:00 ,We visited Malioboro.We arrived at malioboro thirty minutes later.There were many pedicab ,the becak drivers were offering their services to some passengers .When I and My family were walking along the way .We bought some souvenirs as T-shirt.After that we bought food as satay.At about 17:00 we left magelang and back to home.
      we were tired but we were very happy.

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diantika mengatakan...

ketika sedang liburan hal ap yg kesannya menarik

whii-wiindta Riivdda Angelica mengatakan...

WAHYU WINDARTI - 33
. akk pgen coment ttg tanda baca'a.
. tloong donx tanda baca diperbaiki lgi.
. truus sma grammar'a jg iia.
. tpii critanya sudah mnarik kogk.
. secara over all, is the best. ;D
. smga coment akk ini dpt mnjdi motivasi jdii lbh baik lgii.

ulfatul lutfiyah mengatakan...

@diantika :paling menarik makan sate sore" di malioboro mak nyusss rasane haha:D


@WAHYU: sipp yu thanks atas saran nya :)

Adham Azulgrana mengatakan...

Reviewer : Adham Septia WS / 01

1. Grammarnya sudah cukup, namun perhatikan lagi penggunaan huruf kapital pada kalimatnya.

ulfatul lutfiyah mengatakan...

@adham : sippp dham...

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